Awesome work :)
Haha that kick is sooo strong and sounds sooo good now :)
Awesome work man!!
Can't wait to see what you make next :P
Especially now that you have nexus :)
ShootingStar
Awesome work :)
Haha that kick is sooo strong and sounds sooo good now :)
Awesome work man!!
Can't wait to see what you make next :P
Especially now that you have nexus :)
ShootingStar
I'm excited too!
Yes!
Who doesn't love listening to a coffee machine for almost 9 minutes!
Haha
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So many interesting sounds :)
Really nice
Had some great percussion samples in there, but it got a little repetitive after awhile, but then your synths and other sounds were really nice, overall really good.
What I would fix/ add/ change:
-Add more layers in there, like a pad or something gated.
-Try using a different bass in there, and make it stronger.
-Make the kick stronger, and change up your beat every now and then.
Overall though, really great work!
Keep it up!
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ShootingStar
Hey man, thank you for the review! Yeah, I spent a very long time mixing the drums. I wanted to make them perfect. Most of the changes in the drums were in the closed hi hats, which change frequently throughout the beginning of the song. Other than that, you're right, they are fairly repetitive, but I wanted a simple beat for this song.
I was debating adding a pad, but I wasn't sure what I would have it do. I also didn't want to clutter this song up. I have a gated effect at 2:14.
The bass in all my songs is consistently "too high" so I wanted to make something that was moderate this time around. I'm also confused by what you mean when you stronger. Does that mean louder? Deeper? More overdrive?
I was surprised when you suggested making the kick stronger! I thought the kick was just right. These are our opinions however.
I think I was just trying to make this song perfect mixing-wise because that is the hardest part of creating a piece for me. I've always had trouble with it, so I was really trying to get better at it with this song. I thank you for the good review though, and thanks for listening!
- Arron -
PS - I will indeed check out your stuff.
Pretty good :D
Nice sounds, has a cool beat to it, overall really good :)
My only problem is you definitely need to add a bass in there, and also try to make it a little less repetitive, and I could definitely see some vocals going in here, if you get a chance try playing around with that. I think it would sound pretty good!
Awesome work!
5/5
9/10
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ShootingStar
True, it is repetitive. It originally had some bass, alot actually. I turned it down though, guess turned it down too much. Vocals would be nice. Thanks for the support and review man. Glad you liked it.
You keep it up too, you got some skills there.
Awesome :)
Maybe stuff wasn't mastered too great, but it was still a really great song :)
Try working with the mastering so you don't have things going in and out volume wise.
Other than that, AWESOME work!!
Can't wait to hear more from you!!
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I actually accidentally turned off one of my compressors during rendering, so it sounds like that. :P I'll reupload as soon as possible. XD
Really nice
Very suspenseful at the beginning :D
And then it got even better :P Haha really great work!
Especially at 0:59 :D Oh yeah!
Awesome work!
Keep it up!
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ShootingStar
Sweet, thanks!
Nice
Really great song man! Haha at the beginning i was like bouncing in my chair :D
And then the vocals did get off a little from the drums and the track, but really overall GREAT song!
Happy, Dancey, and really awesome :D
Haha and great singing! I really liked it :P
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ShootingStar
Glad you enjoyed it! I shall :)
Awesome
Really nice sound man :) Really like the filter at the beginning, and then your beat was nice..
Really great song :)
Don't have much to say, other than keep it up!
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Thanks man ! i apreciate it i will check your stuff for sure
Oh yeah
Really awesome!!
1. Nice piano sound
2. GREAT composition, really honestly don't know if I've heard a better one, this is really good, don't know what to say, other than I LOVE this :)
Really awesome job, keep up the awesome piano music!
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Thanks! glad you like this one.
btw thanks for the fave :)
I'm gonna see your ng profile
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