I can't really hear a glitch in the kick - I wouldn't worry about that too much :)
But really, this is a very calm piece, very flowing.
Some things I don't like:
The hi-hat around 0:50 is kinda loud - turn it down some :)
-Seems to lack energy to push it forward, like maybe add a big buildup or something..
Also, I don't really like how it changes style in the middle..
Other than that, maybe a little repetitive, but overall really great work :)
Keep up the great work!!
(and try to change up around your samples - it's very obvious you use nexus :)
Alright. :)
I'll try to remake this track soon, I am currently bussy with 2 other projects and a collab. Most presets are from nexus yeah, I'll try to stick of nexus an bit more. It's my baby. :3
I'll be sure to check some of your stuff too.
Thanks for reviewing!
This is a pretty good song to start off :)
Maybe change the hi-hat to something a little less gritty - kinda hard to explain that one but pm if you want explaination..
It is a little repetitive, not too bad though - that's where you should start messing with cut-offs and adding different effects throughout the song that make it interesting to listen to.
And also, something I always try to do in my music is make a melody - definitely try that here.
Other than that, really overall a good song :)
Keep up the awesome songs!!
Check out some of my stuff please, would really appreciate it!
ShootingStar
Thank you very much! I will be getting some nice house percussion samples (including hi hats) soon! I probably should've added a melody, yes. Usually I make like a pad then forget lol. Thank you for the review!
This is a really great sounding song - first of all it's very professional, sounds great, flows awesome, and best of all has a loud kick :)
Only things I don't really like about this song - the chord progression and maybe the clap - its a little loud.
Other than that, really great song :) Can't say much more.
Keep up the awesome songs! :D
Look forward to more releases!
The only thing I personally don't like is your "clap" - I think it could be a little shorter and something maybe harder.. (i know i didn't explain that very well :D sorry pm if you want example)
Other than that, really sounding good :)
Really liked all the instruments together :) Sounded really nice :D
Really sounds awesome!! really like the epic sound and feel to it :D
Just curious, but what program do you use and what samples?
Cause I've been trying to make something like this but I really don't have the samples for it :P
Keep up the awesome songs!! :D
Dude - to start off it was a little weird with the bass because it was like on weird beats and stuff
But then at 0:20, it was like yeah! jammin to my favorite music :D
Also, regarding some mastering issues, i would take down the snare a little and pull up the kick, sounds a little treble and snare heavy..
And maybe a little repetive especially towards the beginning of the song, but not too bad..
Overall, I think you did a great job on taking this song and completely flipping it upside down (in a good way) and turning it into your own style, really great job!
Keep up the awesome tracks dude!
Yay, thanks for a new review from you, ShootingStar, I'm glad you liked the track overall! Of course I'll work on it a bit soon and edit the mentioned things. :]
Awesome :D Haha yet another amazing title name :P
This is really some AWESOME dnb :P
Really turned out great!
Thanks for the doing drums for me :D
Haha I'm completely speechless :D
Hope to collab again sometime soon!!
Ok! Here we go!
What I don't like/ would change:
-The beginning pad(but once it gets sidechained it's fine)
-Your sound samples (overall, but some of them are good)
-Maybe structuring of the song (a little, not too bad but you'll get the hang of it as you make more songs)
-Make more layers at a time, even if its a pad in the background, or strings - just add something
-The clap, I don't like the delay on it
What is good! :D
-When the drums come in at the beginning, nice kick drum
-Nice catchy melody
-Good sidechaining :D
-Bass = good
So overall, I would say a really good song - but can use a lot of work and techinal tweaking.
Keep up the awesome songs!!
Really great job on this one :D
I really think this deserves a top #1 easily :)
Even though it's not much, I decided I'll go ahead and review your song :)
In my mind, a perfect song, I really can't think of anything that would need changed, etc, the slowdowns are perfect :D
Definitely think you're gonna win this competition!!
Everything else, mastered very well, really like this song :D
Combination of genres and things are amazing :) fit sooo well together!!
Keep up the awesome songs man!! :D
(By the way, check out my song _/Electronica\_, it got #11 in the top 30 :D)
So I would personally like to explain why people are voting 0 - it's because you know when you go to submit your work on the audio portal it says:
"You are making the legal claim that it is your own original work."
Now, it's really great that you understand how to add Boobass and Nexus and use presets from there, but the thing is you didn't make this - all you did was import the midi and put sounds to it.
So is that really your work?
No.
So next time, either make it yourself, or maybe just take a look at a midi to maybe figure out the chord structure and melody.
But really, make your own music, don't steal others.
Hope to see some better and original creations later on!
Shootingstar:
when you go to submit your work on the audio portal it says:
"You are making the legal claim that it is your own original work."
EpicM:
Theres a thing called Remix, every bit of changing counts as one even replacing instruments
I changed a midi, but still left in the credits of where its from (stop complaining!)
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Shooting star:
it's really great that you understand how to add Boobass and Nexus and use presets from there, but the thing is you didn't make this - all you did was import the midi and put sounds to it.
EpicM:
Yeah it is great that i understand
And i didnt mention me making this, I altered
I do remember me saying : It's from Pokemon
Didnt i? (again, stop complaining!)
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shooting star:
So is that really your work?
No.
EpicM:
again i didnt claim it was my work, its a midi like mentioned in the author comments that i just picked it on the net :] saying its not mine to begin with
So far you told me twice its not my work, bad boy/girl !! or whatever you may be
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Shootingstar:
So next time, either make it yourself, or maybe just take a look at a midi to maybe figure out the chord structure and melody.
EpicM:
Yes mister! oh for crying out loud, you should have listened to more of my music before using your brains to teach me what to do
I got plenty of music that i did make myself
I do look at midis and listen to music of people to get ideas/inspiration
Everybody gets bored!!!
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Shootingstar:
But really, make your own music, don't steal others.
Hope to see some better and original creations later on!
EpicM:
See answer just above this one
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I will put up the site where the midi is from
Just stop repeating yourself, its annoying...
PS
did i mention i was pretty direct in talking to people?
you better get used to it ;-)
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