Pretty good..
Nice intro...
The only thing i don't like is your beats at 29 secs...
But good job!
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Pretty good..
Nice intro...
The only thing i don't like is your beats at 29 secs...
But good job!
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Yea im not to keen on the snare sound eathier..
Really good!!
The only thing i would change is the bass drum...
But I really liked the intro...
And I could definitely see some rappers with this song....
You should do that!
Keep up the good work!!
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ite kl thanks man will check ur stuff soon..
Pretty good..
The only thing is that you need more than a bass and drums...
Add a melody, or a different synth..
But great work on the drums!!
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Thanks, as stated this is super rough, I just wanted to post it up so a few friends could hear what I was talking about. I do definitely plan to flesh it out more so it isn't just a somewhat generic drum and bass beat.
Pretty good...
The very beginning bassline was really cool, except for the fact the effect you put on it didn't start immediately...which didn't sound very good....
Also, add in some variation, it seemed like after the intro, it was the same thing over and over again...
You may want to change around some of your synths...
And also, it would sound alot better if you added a lead melody overtop after the main melody has gone on for a little...
Also, experiment around with filters, and other sounds...
But good work!!
Keep it up!!!
ShootingStar
:D ty
Awesome!!!
The only thing i'd change is at 28 secs, instead of having the different beat, i would make that the impact of the intro, so have the kick on downbeats, snare on 2+4, and then hi-hat upbeats...
But really good sounds!!!
Good work!
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ShootingStar
ok, i'll work on it :p
thank you!
glad you like it :D
I thinks:
Pretty good, just a little repetitive..
You need alot more variation in the first beat...
But at about 1 min. it was really good!!!
Keep up the good work!!
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ShootingStar
Ah repetitiveness, it plagues all my songs. I'll have to dissect this one and see how I can fix it, because this melody is too good to go to waste. I'll check out your stuff as well
Good...
The beginning needs a little work...and it takes a while for the build up to happen...but you had some REALLY good sounds and melodies going on there...
So overall, Good job!!!
Keep it up!
4/5
7/10
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ShootingStar
Thanks dude, if you would pm me on how i could fix the beginning that would be fantastic. But if you don't get to it don't worry about it!
Sounds good!
My only issue is the beginning and the comment from the review below...
But good work!
Keep it up!
4/5
8/10
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ShootingStar
sweet, will do thanks! =]
Very nice
Maybe a little more variation in the beginning...
but good work!!!
Keep it up!
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ShootingStar
Thanks for the review. I'll check your music out. ;)
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