Ok...
This was an ok song. There's alot more you could have done with it.
First of all, the sax needs to become atleast a piano because it sounds so weird and doesn't fit this tune. Second, there's no bass when it's supposed to come in. Don't only use a crash and hi-hat for it. Put in there was the bass. You need that to be much louder. Also this song was very repetitive. Add at least a chord structure into it on a pad would sound really good.
That's the bad stuff. Also you need to add in more melody's even though the song doesn't have any more. Try and make up a few.
Srry, but this needs alot of work.
2/5
-ParagonXX9