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Wow...

This was actually a pretty good song, but the melody about 20 secs in should have been on a piano, not guitar, it sounds so horrible.

Other than that awesome song.

4/5

djt820 responds:

I thought u were paragonx9 for a second, Lol. Well, yeah, the piano idea is actually a really good solution. Thanks for the review \m/

Ok...

I'm guessing that you atleast have guitar hero 2 becuause alot of the songs you've made are from there.

Needed a bass guitar direly add one in and I'll vote 5/5.

Not for now.

Now its a 3/5

Nice work.

djt820 responds:

Well, there is actually a bass but not a fretless one that is normally used. Thats why it sounds different. Thanks for the review man \m/

Ok...

This was an ok song. There's alot more you could have done with it.

First of all, the sax needs to become atleast a piano because it sounds so weird and doesn't fit this tune. Second, there's no bass when it's supposed to come in. Don't only use a crash and hi-hat for it. Put in there was the bass. You need that to be much louder. Also this song was very repetitive. Add at least a chord structure into it on a pad would sound really good.

That's the bad stuff. Also you need to add in more melody's even though the song doesn't have any more. Try and make up a few.

Srry, but this needs alot of work.

2/5

-ParagonXX9

Different...

Wow, this was a great track, but what is up with the attempt for rapping? It sounded pretty bad and you couldn't understand him at first.

-ParagonXX9

TheComet responds:

Wasn't attempting rapping, but my singing ability still sucks XD
I'm going to put out a novox version once I finish this paper I'm working on for english class

Dude.

That was a beast song, just one question. Why didn't you put the bass guitar in? It would have made such a better song.

TheComet responds:

I couldn't made a decent bass guitar instrument, although if/when I go to remix this I'll see what I can do

Awesome!

This was the best "under cover" song that I've heard on newgrounds. Only one thing wrong, it's way too repetitive. It keeps with the same beat and also the same stuff over and over again.

Smooth.................

That really was very smooth sounding, it went together really well.

ParagonXX9

Reveiw some of mine too please!

Tanooki-John responds:

Hey, you have some good music yourself too. Sounds like they would be prefered for Final Fantasy type flashes. Keep up the good work and im glad you liked mine too.

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THis was really good, even for video game. I liked the beginning, but only one problem. IN the beginning when you had the bass on up beats, change that to hi-hats, then add bass in.

ParagonXX9

OK................................

This was really random!! Why did u even make it?

Cool harp though!

Check out my work!

ParagonXX9

Cool

This was a little repetitive but other than that awesome!
Keep working on those kinda songs and you'll get better!

ParagonXX9

I've been making music for about 4 years now, I use Fl Studio 9, and I'm currently signed to 5 Line Records. A new album will be available for purchase soon, hope you can support me!

Age 29, Male

Raleigh N.C.

Joined on 5/5/05

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