ShootingStar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[..:: Far above the clouds ::..]

Good idea,

But I know you use FL Studio, and please, find a different bass, it sounds very cheesy and doesn't sound that great, you might want more of a kick, but other than some small things, you have a pretty good song...I would also guess that you use the demo...and something I was told alot when I was a new artist was not to use FL presets, like the claps, and snare drums...Also a bit repetitive...But good work!!Keep it up!

ShootingStar

Rainer321 responds:

You're right about the instruments, most of them are the default instruments (I only 'made' the synth). Next time I'll try to make all my instruments myself. I'm not using any demo though.

The repetitiveness, well I know. I tried to introduce more melodies but it just ruined the song. In my opinion trance should be a bit repetitive though ;-)

Thanks a lot!

[A Single Kiss -[Final]-]

Nice

the only thing that kind of bothers me, is the "wind" sound, and the extra space in the drums, other than that..GREAT!!
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Helth responds:

space in the drums is caus of harmonic thingy =b

Helth
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[[8bit] because she said "no"]

Nice

I really liked the drums, and your synths but you could have done more with this, like at 0:26 it needs something else..but other than that, Good!
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[^ -Toxic Harp -^]

Very nice!

Everything flowed, the transitions were great..Very good job!!

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DjMontana responds:

Hey Shootingstar !

Thnx for The Comment&Rating... good to see the Track is in some
way a Favorit.
i Did not now what to expect especially sinds my last Submission..

hope too see more off this :D XD

greetz DJMontana

[Jezcake_ [DEMO] {WIP}]

Nice!!

Other than the repeat of the first sequence, this is a really good song!!Definitely make this longer!!!I liked the beat, it really all went together...
10/10
5/5
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[FFXII - Seeking Power]

Very nice

I was very dark sounding, yet had an ambient feel to it..Great job with this one...Everything goes together well....
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[[Helth & GW] - Gate to Heaven]

Nice,

The intro could use a little more reverb, I'm going to be nit-picky, I like how you changed up the bass drum beat, the clap might also need some delay, a tiny bit...
I like the transition, how you led it from the intro to the main part, again the clap could have also been more of a trance/dance clap...The background bass maybe a little too loud, The main melody is great, the chord progression all fits, it seems to be in the same key sig. etc....I like the fade out for a little bit (by the way I'm writing this and listening at the same time..) Good build-up......Then the main melody is back again, great full sound, the crash cymbals maybe a little to loud....Great loop .... Overall this is a great song!!!You both did excellent work!!!!
10/10
5/5
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gamerworld14 responds:

Thanks, you will have to talk to Helth about this, he is the main creator of this song, I am really happy that everybody is taking such a long time to review and criticize this song. Thanks for the download and 10/10 and 5/5! I will try to check out your work now :D

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-gamerworld14

[DjSc00p - ~=-`;+WIP+;`-=~]

Makes a statement...

Great job!!!!This sounds nice, I really like how you started it and everything, this could definitely go somewhere, you could even make it a little longer, the only thing I have to criticize is the "clap" at 1:43, it doesn't exactly fit..But great work!!!
10/10
5/5
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DjSc00p responds:

yeah, i agree the clap at 1:43 really doesnt fit for me. I thought that too but i thought the kick would be too weak and boring alone, but maybe ill just take out the claps and maybe the kick will make it sound smoother and more soothing lol. Thanks for the review and scores and the DL and yeah ill check out your stuff :)

[Ancient Experiment]

Wow!!!!!!

Your intro was great, I really liked the transitions, you did a great job on this one....I like how the classical fits into the dance, Great work!!!
10/10
5/5
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Ambrossys responds:

:) Thank you!