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Great!

The only thing at 0:41 was the bass seemed a little off, but I really liked all your sounds! Awesome!

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Sacrafan responds:

Why, thank you!

This is really good!!

I really like the piano part in the middle, liked the chord progression...GOOD WORK!

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Sacrafan responds:

Another awesome review lol :P

Awesome!

Very upbeat and sounds great!!Maybe strings in the background, or something else would make this cool, but right now it is AWESOME!!!
Good Work!

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Sacrafan responds:

Thx! :D

Good melody

But where's the song!!!Finish it!!!Make more!!!

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GoldbloodedDragon responds:

Yep, It's done.

And, sure I'll check out your stuff.

Awesome :)

Very Nice!! Nothing to say...

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DJStufo responds:

Thanks, I'll check out your stuff :)

Good idea,

But I know you use FL Studio, and please, find a different bass, it sounds very cheesy and doesn't sound that great, you might want more of a kick, but other than some small things, you have a pretty good song...I would also guess that you use the demo...and something I was told alot when I was a new artist was not to use FL presets, like the claps, and snare drums...Also a bit repetitive...But good work!!Keep it up!

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Rainer321 responds:

You're right about the instruments, most of them are the default instruments (I only 'made' the synth). Next time I'll try to make all my instruments myself. I'm not using any demo though.

The repetitiveness, well I know. I tried to introduce more melodies but it just ruined the song. In my opinion trance should be a bit repetitive though ;-)

Thanks a lot!

Nice

the only thing that kind of bothers me, is the "wind" sound, and the extra space in the drums, other than that..GREAT!!
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Helth responds:

space in the drums is caus of harmonic thingy =b

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Nice!

The intro was great, I loved how the beginning was soft, and then came the guitar..Great job!!!!
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Zelsor responds:

thx for the review=] i will check your work later, my connection is rather slow atm cant listen properly.

Very nice!

Everything flowed, the transitions were great..Very good job!!

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DjMontana responds:

Hey Shootingstar !

Thnx for The Comment&Rating... good to see the Track is in some
way a Favorit.
i Did not now what to expect especially sinds my last Submission..

hope too see more off this :D XD

greetz DJMontana

Nice,

The intro could use a little more reverb, I'm going to be nit-picky, I like how you changed up the bass drum beat, the clap might also need some delay, a tiny bit...
I like the transition, how you led it from the intro to the main part, again the clap could have also been more of a trance/dance clap...The background bass maybe a little too loud, The main melody is great, the chord progression all fits, it seems to be in the same key sig. etc....I like the fade out for a little bit (by the way I'm writing this and listening at the same time..) Good build-up......Then the main melody is back again, great full sound, the crash cymbals maybe a little to loud....Great loop .... Overall this is a great song!!!You both did excellent work!!!!
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gamerworld14 responds:

Thanks, you will have to talk to Helth about this, he is the main creator of this song, I am really happy that everybody is taking such a long time to review and criticize this song. Thanks for the download and 10/10 and 5/5! I will try to check out your work now :D

Your Fellow Newgrounder,
-gamerworld14

I've been making music for about 4 years now, I use Fl Studio 9, and I'm currently signed to 5 Line Records. A new album will be available for purchase soon, hope you can support me!

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Raleigh N.C.

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