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Hmm :)

Pretty nice intro :) I would personally change it - it doesn't exactly fit the rest of the song :D
Other than that, really amazing song :) Really sounds great!
Where'd you get the vocals?? They sound AMAZING with the song!!
Really great job on this song!!
Keep it up! :D

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ShootingStar

Ok :)

I think this is something that can definitely be improved on, but is also something that I can stand :D
So to start off, nice choice of a pluck ( bit stylez right? :D ) but I think it fits, and the bass is nice too :)
My problem with this (and yeah, we all try and do this but it never works out) is to mix a 4/4 with 6/8 triplets - in the hi-hat try just making it upbeats and I think you'll have a pretty good song :D
And make it longer, of course but as you said it's just a loop you're working on, so no points off for that.
Also - try not to use Fl presets (if you keep using them everybody will know you use fl :D)
But really good work overall!
Keep it up! :)

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Doox4 responds:

Good deal, thanks man, actually that was a Nexus Pluck, haha.

Wow :)

haha yeah, not much to say after the guy below me :D
I agree with everything he says, except maybe the kick getting louder.
But other than that, awesome song :) AWESOME BASS :D
Haha
Keep up the awesome songs! ;)

ShootingStar

Bracksta responds:

thanks for the great review :), i hope to talk to you soon on the label :), maybe in a collab

Nice :)

My only problem, there seems to be this empty space in this song, try and add some more layers or something, don't know exactly.
Maybe a sidechained pad (if you need how to do it pm me)
But other than that, sounds good :) Really liked the vocals! :D
Keep up the awesome songs :P

ShootingStar

momboom1 responds:

Thanks pl0x :D. Umm yeah im not very good at sidechaining so ima pm you :D. Thanks for the comments and help.

interesting :)

I kinda like this song, cause I think it's a really good remix :D
People now days just take songs and remake them, not remix them :P
So you get a 10/10 from me!
Criticism: I think it's a little fast, but then again I guess that's part of your style and remix.
There were a little awkward moments where it's like whats happening, like maybe the beginning and some other places.
Other than that, awesomesauce remix!! ;D
Keep up the awesome beats!

ShootingStar

dreadnought106 responds:

Well It's somewhat random I will admit because I wasn't really following any sortof plan :L And I made it deliberately fast cos I felt like it :L Thanks for the review :)

-Dreadnought106

Very nice

Haha I agree with DaveGuy - this song should be on DDR :D
Something I would personally change - the beginning, make a reverse crash or something into 0:03 - not just all of a sudden kick.
Other than that, really awesome song :)
Great song, sounds amazing with the vocals, and your awesome beatz :D
10/10
5/5
+fave
+download

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ShootingStar

Really nice

I think you did this remix justice, and yeah haha there are a TON of other remixes out there.
Don't really have any criticism, other than personally something I do in my songs is have a crash, like around 1:04 I think you could do one, just to show where the phrasing is.
Really nice otherwise! Upbeat, uplifting :D
Awesome!! :D
Keep up the awesome songs!

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ShootingStar

Amazing

Wow :) I'm really surprised how good this song is :D
The ONLY thing I would change would be to pull down the kick (not something you hear from me everyday)
Other than that, really amazing song :D
Like the counter melody in the background, sounds like it's being played by a bass really high or something :P
10/10
5/5

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T-Free responds:

Hey, thanks! Great to see a review by you again, ShootingStar! And yes, I'll take a listen at some of your tracks when I get down to it.^^

Nice!!

Really nice song! Overall, really good.
What I would change:
1. In the beginning the claps and crash cymbals are a little loud.
2.Mastering issues, more bass and kick :)
Other than that, really good song!
Really enjoyed it :D
9/10
5/5

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Camel-Juice-Music responds:

Thanks, we'll tweak the song abit ^^
Sure we'll check your work

Sweet :)

Yeah haha you definitely need to work on timing issues :)
But like the guy below me said, definitely add some chords in there..
Also, if you're gonna make a song as long as this one is, variation is key, also intriguing melodies/ awesome stuffs :D haha
Otherwise, really good song!!

_/ShootingStar\_

ShadowsOfLight responds:

Yup yup! My variations and timing went out the window once it hit 3AM and I attempted to make this at 4 haha But very true, variety is key!

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